She didn't go to parties, but she left hidden of her parents but I don't have to hide as she did, because I have more freedom than my mother had. So I think that my life isn't cooler than my mother's because I have will make more than she, because she fought for what she wanted.
She married very early but she made out more before married. My parents are married for twenty years. their life is different than mine, they're always work so me and my brother could have a future and I think that they have best than mine.
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ResponderExcluirThe life of my mother was (-) different than mine. She worked and left much earl(IER)(HER)home and went (TO) lived (WITH HER) sister in other city but I (DON'T HAVE TO LIVE) in other city. When (SHE) was teen my mother (DIDN'T HAVE) freedom, she lived with (HER) parents and worked with (THEM).
She didn't go to parties, but she left hidden of (HER) parents but I (DON'T HAVE TO HIDE AS SHE DID), because (I HAVE) more freedom than my mother (HAD). So I think that my life (ISN'T) cooler than my mother('S) because I have will (MAKE) more than she, because she fought (FOR) (WHAT SHE) wanted.
She married very early but she (MADE) out more before married. My parents are married (FOR) twenty years. (THEIR) life (IS) different than mine, they're always work (SO) (ME) and my brother (COULD HAVE A) future and I think that they have best (???) than mine.
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